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Re: Ice Cream Romance
I don't know exactly how to review this. It's great the way it is. Once again, you enchant me with your quirky, colorful style and imagery, painting a perfect little ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
Well, after three pages of sitting back and watching in amusement as my fellow YWS-ers tear at each other's throats, I've decided to step in and voice my humble opinion. ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
I think that a lot of the people who have reviewed this have completely missed the whole idea of the topic. I'm actually rather disappointed in the poor perception exhibited ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I particularly like this poem's relatability; it describes a situation which many teenagers (myself included) have found themselves in. Your imagery, though perhaps a little repetetive at times, is ve
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: The Magician
My child, you have a talent for the craft of poetry; there is no denying that. The way you flit around the edges of order and reality but never quite ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: And I've never been more alive
It's sadly amusing to me how this poem has gotten enough likes to make it a featured work, yet only three people (well, four now!) have reviewed it. I'm not ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: How Can We Sleep
Oh my gosh, I love you. Like, for real. I'm going to abduct your mind and absorb your poetic amazingness through the process of osmosis, okay? Just thought I'd get ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: this is not a poem about love
I really like the concept of this poem: trying to express in words something that really can't be expressed in such a way. I also like how it has no ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Winter
Hey there dear! I'm Warrior Princess annnnnnnd I am going to review your poem, 'kay? 'Kay. :P Icey, (I believe it's spelled "icy") silver glitters of frost, Pretty words!! They ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Crimson.
1st stanza: I liked it, though I have to agree with Dreamy that the subject wasn't terribly original. But then, what is these days? All the good subjects seem to ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Paradise Found
This is a very pretty poem; good imagery. A few nitpicks: If the world weren't so vast, and my house not as clean I would've been here on another morning, ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Lunatic
Hi, and welcome to YWS! I'm Warior Princess and I will be reviewing your debut poem today. My thoughts and my love drive me differently than you. I like how ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Suicidal Moon
There's not much I can say here that hasn't been said by others....the whole emo theme (especially the cutting) was well presented, but one sees it so often on this ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror
I like this poem, and don't see why everyone else is being so hard on it. Sure, the whole mirror subject is a tad overused, but it is my opinion ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye Mom
Well dear, you know I am a fairly lazy reviewer and see everything through rose-colored glasses, so you musn't expect a very helpful review out of me. I have to ...
Nov 28, 2010
